Friday, August 28, 2009

Raining

Today: 26 August, 2009
Wednesday

Soothing breeze, graying clouds
Coconut trees, swung side by side
Dry green grass, wet again
It is raining

A silent walk, kid shrieking inside
Muddy road, avoiding puddles
Slippers are wet, mud stuck on it
It is raining

Beside a window, in a bus
Looking out, rain running down the widow
Condensed, frosted window
It is raining

Zooming cars, splashing water
Head rests on the glass, enjoying the air
A little drop lands, kissing my nose
It is raining

A man dressed in white, big turban on his head
Kids jumping, splashing water in air
A flower in the corner, dew on its petals
It is raining

Sun peeked out, from its veil of clouds
Rosy sky, with the air of romance
Woman hugging her guy, ride on the bike
It is raining


Bangalore is beautiful :)

4 comments:

karan said...

Hey,its a really beautiful piece of imagination!
Dunno about the rhyming stuff in a poem though :)

But the description is so life-like, i felt as if i myself am experiencing those moments!

Aditi said...

Actually it is "life-like".. No imagination. I saw and experienced all that :)

Rain always moves me. I love rains. :)

Aditi said...

And did where did I rhyme in this poem??
Its just series of broken lines :)
so i felt

karan said...

Thats wat i meant!!!
I don't know if u intended to ve some rhyme scheme :P